For this week's blog post (due December 12), you need to respond to at least two other students' blog entries from last week. Go to last week's blog post in order to do this and click on "comments." You can then read what your classmates wrote last week. Your response needs to be at least four sentences or more in length and directly respond to what your classmate has previously written. What do you think about your fellow student's idea of a "perfect" world? Are there any flaws? Any ideas you hadn't considered? Any questions you have? Be sure to proofread your response prior to clicking submit. Happy blogging!
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Andrew Z
12/9/2016 03:56:26 pm
done
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Matt Sweeney
12/10/2016 09:18:02 am
In Ty’s perfect world everything is free. I disagree with that. What is the point of selling things if they are free. Also this could cause chaos on Black Friday and other holiday shopping events. Also why would you want to work if everything is free. Then their would be no food, clothes, sports, and stadiums. I like the school ideas because I really don’t like essays and homework.
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Justin E
12/11/2016 11:50:25 am
The flaw I saw in one the comments was that there were no taxes is everything was free. That will only bring are economy down more people will end up in poverty My mom owns a small business and her job will disappear because she does taxes. A lot of people also said that there would be no crime. I hate to say it but crime not going away because even the police shootings happening right now, the police are committing crimes. Also questions could be asked like who is hiring these people to bad things? Maybe if we found those people then it would cut down crime but crime isn't going extinct. We can however all be treated equally because every id the same they might just have a different color skin or religion. You wonder why terrorism happens is because of racial disputes. We can not stop terrorism only because it happens everywhere and we as the US only care about ourselves, so we don't think about other countries.
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Anna Doughty
12/13/2016 07:26:30 pm
i have chosen to write about Emily G's blog and Katelyn P's blog on a perfect world. in Emily's world there there would be more advanced technology in education witch i agree with and failed to think of myself, i also liked her strong opinion for the fair justice system and peace among others, her perfect world was over all in my opinion pretty steady but what i really want to know is... how would peace among others effect us? how is technology a good standpoint? and how do you see technology as a good impact in school? as for Katelyn's she was specific but i did not agree with most her criteria, i think what i most of all disagreed with was her thoughts on retirement, her words were "in order to retire people would have to have a certain amount of money in there savings account to retire" she says how "hopefully this will convince people to save sooner" but what if someone grew to an age that they could barely work anymore but did not have money to retire...what if someone grew so ill they could not work...i also see a false side to the idea that the government requires you to always have a job? i can see the positives to this, but i more see the negative, for instance... what is the punish for someone who cant work. what if someone cant work because of physical and/or mental issues. there for i see positive and negative sides to both peoples perfect worlds.
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