For this week's blog assignment, I want you to revisit last week's post. Read the poems that your classmates posted and respond to at least two poems via the reply feature. Don't comment on this post! Go back and directly comment under the poem that you are responding to. Be supportive in your comments and highlight lines that really stand out to you.
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Kaira McMahon
10/12/2018 07:21:42 am
“NO!” screamed Lily. Logan had taken the bite of the MONSTER BAR. The ingredient that she didn't want him to eat was dolb otherwise known as...monster blood. Now, Lily knew that monsters were just pretend, but all of the sudden Logan screamed. His hands were turning a deep shade of green and he looked very fearful. Lily told herself that he would not stay like that for long. Although soon he would become a vicious monster, like that thing that chased them home just a few minutes ago. She knew that there had to be a cure to the MONSTER BAR, and she knew just where to find it. Lily grabbed Logan’s fully green hands and yelled at him to get up and go down stairs. As they raced down the stairs and into the living room, they saw that Lucille had fallen asleep while watching her spooky movie. Lily practically dragged Logan out their front door and into the night. When they got outside, they suddenly froze, nobody was outside trick or treating.
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Kaira McMahon
10/12/2018 07:30:11 am
“NO!” screamed Lily. Logan had taken the bite of the MONSTER BAR. The ingredient that she didn't want him to eat was dolb otherwise known as...monster blood. Now, Lily knew that monsters were just pretend, but all of the sudden Logan screamed. His hands were turning a deep shade of green and he looked very fearful. Lily told herself that he would not stay like that for long. Although soon he would become a vicious monster, like that thing that chased them home just a few minutes ago. She knew that there had to be a cure to the MONSTER BAR, and she knew just where to find it. Lily grabbed Logan’s fully green hands and yelled at him to get up and go down stairs. As they raced down the stairs and into the living room, they saw that Lucille had fallen asleep while watching her spooky movie. Lily practically dragged Logan out their front door and into the night. When they got outside, they suddenly froze, nobody was outside trick or treating.
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